--- wikisrc/wiki/cvs.mdwn	2009/10/21 01:15:50	1.2
+++ wikisrc/wiki/cvs.mdwn	2010/07/03 20:53:49	1.7
@@ -1,13 +1,20 @@
-#### Getting wikisrc
+#### Getting `wikisrc`
 
     $ cvs -d <username>@wiki.netbsd.org:/cvsroot get wikisrc
 
+#### Creating page "Foo Bar"
 
-#### Editing page "foo"
+    $ cd .../wikisrc
+    $ echo '\[[!meta title="Foo Bar, or, A Nice-Looking Title"]]' > foo_bar.mdwn
+    $ $EDITOR foo_bar.mdwn
+    $ cvs add foo_bar.mdwn
+    $ cvs commit -m "all about Foo Bar" foo_bar.mdwn
+
+#### Editing page "Foo Bar"
 
     $ cd .../wikisrc
-    $ $EDITOR foo.mdwn
-    $ cvs commit -m "all about foo" foo.mdwn
+    $ $EDITOR foo_bar.mdwn
+    $ cvs commit -m "more about Foo Bar" foo_bar.mdwn
 
 When you commit to `wikisrc`, the pages affected by your edit are
 automatically regenerated. Your change will be displayed in
@@ -15,5 +22,8 @@ automatically regenerated. Your change w
 
 #### Previewing your changes
 
-    $ cd .../pkgsrc/www/ikiwiki && make package-install clean
-    $ cd .../wikisrc && ikiwiki --render foo.mdwn
+For a somewhat representative rendering, without benefit of the
+wiki's config file:
+
+    $ cd .../pkgsrc/www/ikiwiki && make install clean
+    $ cd .../wikisrc && ikiwiki `pwd` /dev/null --render foo_bar.mdwn | less