--- wikisrc/wiki/cvs.mdwn	2009/10/21 01:06:48	1.1.1.1
+++ wikisrc/wiki/cvs.mdwn	2009/12/18 20:51:02	1.5
@@ -2,6 +2,12 @@
 
     $ cvs -d <username>@wiki.netbsd.org:/cvsroot get wikisrc
 
+#### Creating page "foo"
+
+    $ cd .../wikisrc
+    $ $EDITOR foo.mdwn
+    $ cvs add foo.mdwn
+    $ cvs commit -m "all about foo" foo.mdwn
 
 #### Editing page "foo"
 
@@ -9,9 +15,14 @@
     $ $EDITOR foo.mdwn
     $ cvs commit -m "all about foo" foo.mdwn
 
-When you commit to `wikisrc`, the pages affected by your edit are automatically regenerated. Your change will be displayed in [[RecentChanges]] as type _cvs_.
+When you commit to `wikisrc`, the pages affected by your edit are
+automatically regenerated. Your change will be displayed in
+[[RecentChanges]] as type _cvs_.
 
 #### Previewing your changes
 
+For a somewhat representative rendering, without benefit of the
+wiki's config file:
+
     $ cd .../pkgsrc/www/ikiwiki && make package-install clean
-    $ cd .../wikisrc && ikiwiki --render foo.mdwn
+    $ cd .../wikisrc && ikiwiki `pwd` /dev/null --render foo.mdwn | less