--- wikisrc/pkgsrc/intro_to_packaging.mdwn	2014/07/08 14:52:13	1.4
+++ wikisrc/pkgsrc/intro_to_packaging.mdwn	2014/07/09 12:34:13	1.6
@@ -13,9 +13,7 @@ listed below:
 ## pkgsrc tree
 
 You should have a copy of the pkgsrc tree sitting somewhere on your
-disk, already bootstrapped, see this [blog
-post](http://saveosx.org/pkgsrc-bootstrap/) on how to do this.
-
+disk, already bootstrapped.
 The tree contains a `Makefile`, a `README`, distfiles, packages,
 category directories containing the ports, the bootstrap directory
 and some documentation.
@@ -269,8 +267,7 @@ PKG_DEFAULT_OPTIONS+=      -pulseaudio -
   I disabled a few options so less ports would break, pulseaudio
   doesn't build on Mac OS X for example, neither do x264, dconf
 
-Keep in mind that there are many other available options documented
-in the official pkgsrc guide.
+Keep in mind that there are many other available options.
 
 
 ## creating a simple port
@@ -596,20 +593,13 @@ You can find the 2bwm port I submitted i
 ## pkgsrc and wip
 
 If you want to submit your port for others to use you can either
-subscribe to pkgsrc-wip or ask a NetBSD developer to add it for you
-which can be tough. Even though there are many IRC channels in which
-you can find nice developers, you will have to take the time to get
-to know them. The easiest way for beginners is to submit to pkgsrc-wip
-so other people can review and test it first.
+subscribe to pkgsrc-wip or ask a NetBSD developer to add it for you.
 
 pkgsrc-wip is hosted on
 [sourceforge](https://sourceforge.net/projects/pkgsrc-wip/) and you
 can easily get cvs access to it if you create an account on there
 and send an email to NetBSD developer `@wiz` (Thomas Klausner)
-asking nicely for commit access. I got access fairly quickly and
-he even fixed a port to show me how to do it properly.
-
-You can also send me an email or talk to me on IRC so I can submit it for you.
+asking nicely for commit access.
 
 
 ## the options framework
@@ -680,9 +670,9 @@ packages available for testing. You will
 on the host system. I host my [packages](http://pkgsrc.saveosx.org/)
 on a FreeBSD server with a bootstrapped pkgsrc.
 
-I use this `zsh` function to :
+use this `zsh` function to :
 
-[[!format make """
+[[!format bash """
 add () {
 	# upload the package to remote server
 	scp $1 yrmt@saveosx.org:/usr/local/www/saveosx/packages/Darwin/2013Q4/x86_64/All/ 2> /dev/null
@@ -748,8 +738,7 @@ course.
 
 ## build all packages
 
-Bulk building pkgsrc packages is a topic for another post, see
-jperkin's excellent blog
+see jperkin's excellent blog
 [posts](http://www.perkin.org.uk/posts/distributed-chrooted-pkgsrc-bulk-builds.html)
 about this.
 
@@ -848,21 +837,6 @@ make installed from the pkgsrc bootstrap
 - If you have a feeling a port is stuck in the building stage,
   disable make jobs in your mk.conf
 
-- Please contribute here :)
-
-
-## links
-- [Jonathan Perkin's excellent blog](http://www.perkin.org.uk/)
-- [NetBSD's very extensive pkgsrc guide](http://www.netbsd.org/docs/pkgsrc/)
-- [NetBSD's pkgsrc wiki](http://wiki.netbsd.org/pkgsrc/)
-- Other blog posts here :)
-
-## where to find me
-
-- yrmt@edgebsd.org
-- irc.oftc.net
-	
-	`#saveosx`
 
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