--- wikisrc/pkgsrc/hardening.mdwn	2016/03/17 13:40:11	1.8
+++ wikisrc/pkgsrc/hardening.mdwn	2016/03/17 14:02:06	1.9
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 [[!meta title="Hardening pkgsrc"]]
 
-[pkgsrc](http://www.pkgsrc.org/) supports a number of mechanisms that are meant
-to improve the security of compiled binaries. They can be individually enabled
+A number of mechanisms are available in [pkgsrc](http://www.pkgsrc.org/) to
+improve the security of the resulting system. They can be enabled individually
 in `mk.conf`, and consist of:
 
 * `PKGSRC_MKPIE`: forces the creation of PIE (Position Independent